Famous Face Revision

    Every persons face has features of detail. This person's face in particular shows no emotion, not even when he’s most scared and not even when he’s most happy. His face shows the fearlessness that a warrior obtains after long years of victories in battles of wars. He’s also got these hairless eyebrows that are wrinkled, wrinkled like the really small marks a t-shirt gets that are hard to get out and will only come out with ironing. These eyebrows leave his eyes firmly set in their sockets with a slight shade around them from light blocked by the overhanging eyebrows which give him this distinct look. On the side of each face appears wrinkles by the corner of each eye showing the age that is catching up to him. He doesn’t smile much; he is too calm and emotionless for that. His hairline’s receding pushing his curly gray hair back away showing his forehead. His forehead is pale and white as snow and smooth and soft as a new born baby’s which is created by the inevitable age that we all must face. Although his forehead is white, his cheeks are red and rosy. They look as if they’re beginning to droop with no signs of dimples. His jaw is average size, but appears to be clenched hard permanently. His chin is rounded perfectly to fit his face and almost appears to be holding up his cheeks from slowly drooping down his face to the floor. The edges of his mouth are straight as a line that which is parallel to the ground.  His lips show small signs of wrinkles from the many years of eating and talking. His nose has a big structure looking to it that connects right into the overhanging eyebrows which overshadow his dark blue eyes. The nose is long coming down his face with quite a pointy tip and underneath it are two big nostrils like little caves. His ears are covered by the gray rough hair that almost looks like a cloud from a good distance.

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